All Through The Night (Chapter 3)
Jarrod and Nick walked the blocks to the concert hall. A few hansom cabs slowed as they drew even with the two men obviously dressed for an evening out, but each driver's silent offer was refused....
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Here we have Jarrod and Nick having a lovely evening in San Francisco while Heath, Audra, Victoria, and Silas are having a nightmare at home! Please don't wait too long for the next post!
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Thank you for this wonderful glimpse into San Francisco's cultural life. I love the details, such as the drooping flowers in the woman's coiffure.I'm expecting the judge and his wife to play an...
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I agree...hurry back without delay!I enjoy seeing the two older Barkley boys having such a grand evening...but Nick is going to feel just terrible once he knows what is happening at home. Can't wait...
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Well at least Jarrod and Nick are having a good time. with more story, please!
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Oh, yeah!! I'd almost forgotten poor wounded Heath and the ladies at home with dear ol' Daddy Cade!! And we mustn't forget Silas!! Are we going to hear about what's happening with them next post???...
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Ok, where's Nick's sixth sense of knowing his little brother needs him? What a contrast in situations!
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I love this contrasting look between Jarrod and Nick's night and Heath, Victoria, and Audra's.Thank you for recognizing there's more to Nick than just the ranch.Hurry back !!!Laura
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I so enjoyed this evening out with Jarrod and Nick..and also meeting the judge and his wife..but if they only knew what was happening back at home?! The contrast between the two events was marked and...
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Lovely concert, but I too am waiting for Nick to receive that zing to the brain that tells him Heath is in trouble.Excellent writing!CASEY
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Come on Nick, where's your sixth sense that something is wrong back home? chapter
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I am so enjoying seeing Nick in this unusual setting and the story is very intriguing.
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Welcome back Pan! Wonderful start to what Im sure is going to be another tremendous story from you. What a great idea to give Nick a secret love of music and youve made it so believable. Im a big fan...
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I'm on the edge of my seat about to drop my bowl o' popcorn wondering whether Nick or Jarrod are going to have that tiny little voice in the back of their heads say "The family's in trouble--ride back...
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I like this view of the brothers engaged in a somewhat different activity. Juxtaposed with the drama back at the Ranch it is I believe the eye in the storm possibly?Your dialog is excellent, very well...
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Uh, Nick.....excuse me????? don't you have an itch in your ear telling you that your precious little brother is in BIG TROUBLE????I'm so glad that Jarrod and Nick are relaxing, but, but, but.....if...
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If only the orchestra would be performing the John Wesley Cade Symphony in D (for Dirty and Disgusting) Major!!
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Pan, It is a shame that Coco is relaxing at the spa with the other horses after the roundup, since Nick clearly needs the clairvoyant powers of his pet psychic.I am enjoying this look at Jarrod and...
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It's nice to see Nick appreciates at least some of the finer things in life, not unlike Daddy Cade who "appreciates" quality ladies.
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